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    arl
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        This is a digital painting on fine canvas. I feel it has this abstract quality.  All comments and advice are appreciated. Thanks.

        Arlene

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        mike
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            reminds me of the wizard of oz

            Everything else being equal, I would rather be in the painting zone.

            Website: https://www.mikesartshack.com

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            arl
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                Thanks Mike.

                Arlene

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                Dorrart
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                    Nice sky and the wheat field looks good.

                    Since you asked for advice, I’m not completely sold on the blue foreground.  Too different in character from the rest.  I’d think if there was just a little of the painterly quality of the sky in that foreground it would work better.  Or if the blue area was maybe a darker value, the difference in approach would be less apparent.  Just an opinion.

                    - David

                    "Inspiration exists, but it has to find you working." --Picasso

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                    arl
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                        Thanks David.

                        Arlene

                        #1547241
                        arl
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                            I edited my painting to make the bottom half water with sky reflection. Thanks.

                            Arlene

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                            ilya K
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                                Arlene, frankly, I would omit the water altogether. If I hold my palm to cover it, that upper part works really well with harmonious colors.

                                Ilya K
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                                arl
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                                    Thanks Ilya.

                                    Arlene

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                                    mike
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                                        Or turn it into a narrow creek with a bank at the bottom

                                        Everything else being equal, I would rather be in the painting zone.

                                        Website: https://www.mikesartshack.com

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                                        Old Radagast
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                                            Nice sky and golden wheat! I like the idea of making the water a little creek.

                                            Matthew

                                            Still much to paint and much to learn!
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