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    From a pmp reference, 15.5×11, oils. C+c welcome

    Christel

    #630012
    fedetony
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        Is nice, you can improve the sky making highlights and shadows to give more volume to the clouds :).. also some of the tail’s hair behind the brown horse..:)

        Federico Garcia
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        C&C always welcome :D

        "...when someone gives a critique of your work, fear not. It usually means they like or care more of your work than when they just pat your back." - Tiago

        #630003

        The surrounding countryside, bushes, trees etc. are excellent Christel. I think the horses are slightly wrong. The brown horse has a very short and small head and the grey one looks more like a donkey. Perhaps a tweak or two would be in order as this has the potential to be a very nice painting.

        Chammi
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        #630014

        Excellent background, as usual, Christel.

        Penny
        I live in Wiltshire, England
        “If there are no dogs in Heaven, then when I die I want to go where they went.” -Will Rogers

        #630007

        Thanks Federico, Chammy and Penny. I made some adjustments are replaced the original pic

        Christel

        #630002

        A very attractive horse painting!

        Kay

        Moderator: Watermedia, Mixed Media, Abstract/Contemporary

        #630011
        Triduana
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            Lovely scene, I really like that landscape. :)

            Kay D - Edinburgh, Scotland

            So long, and thanks ...

            #630004
            ~JMW~
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                My eye tends to get drawn to the far hills /skyline division more than the horses..
                Maybe soften the far hill line and define the horses, color/contrast and a little more shadowing under them to set them down..

                ~Joy~

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                CaliAnn
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                    A lovely painting :)

                    #630008

                    Thanks Kay, KayM, CaliAnn and JMW. I’ll have another look at the skyline.

                    Christel

                    #630006
                    jonc50
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                        Nice all around. Is the size in inches?

                        #630009

                        Thanks Jon. Yes inches

                        Christel

                        #630005
                        Skappy
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                            Nice bg maybe too good that it distract from the horses unless they were larger I agree with Chammi the brown horse head seems small.Maybe accentuating the light on the horses will give them more presence
                            I did a simulation for you I hope you donot mind I also add some haze to the distant hills and trees to concentrate more on the horses

                            #630010

                            Thanks Robert! Good point.

                            Christel

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