Hi CT, yes, it's reading abit better. Sorry for just now getting back to you!!
Top reads better. Is the left side part of the mountain, or in front of the mountain? FWIW, I'm still confused there, but could just be me, and please forgive me, not my intention to offend anyone. But, If the left is in front of the background, you need to push the mountain away from it to separate it [values just behind the left]. If it is in fact running with the mountain, then I think you are very very close.
Oh, and good luck on the competition,
I totally forgot to say that before