Is this a better quickie?

[billyg]

More sky in the water, yachts coming into picture, slighly different format, whatever. Oz still on fire and/or dusty. Your having a hard time over there guys,bloody hot too.
Billyg.

[al22]

Good one Billy........only suggestion....lots of that pinky orange in the foreground.......might vary the value of it just for added interest........otherwise, super.........
.........al

[Little Old Lady]

I like this a lot!
JoAnn

[babybrush]

very good, i like

Bethany

[taghera]

Thats a good one Billy...but I would also do as what Al suggests..

[billyg]

Thanks guys, there is actually a bit more variance in the foreground water ? in the actual sketch book painting. But as Im looking at doing it in a larger size I will certainly keep your thoughts in mind Al and Hugh , Ta !
Billyg.

[Alan Cross]

Nice improvment Billy!
Alan