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Old 02-10-2000, 04:16 PM
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Red face oil on canvas

I'll see if I'm successful now in posting the image. Any critique is welcome.The address is: http://www.wetcanvas.com/Critiques/User/room.jpg

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Old 02-10-2000, 04:58 PM
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Hi Julia,

If you put "IMG" surrounded by brackets before your URL and "/IMG" surrounded by brackets after your URL, it will show up in the message like this:




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Old 02-10-2000, 09:46 PM
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I like it. The soft approach suits the mood. Nice colors, gentle purple/yellow complement and a bit of green to avoid monotony. An impression, without the choppy little brushstrokes of Impressionism.

Only two suggestions. On the left, there's an unexplained light triangle that you could do away with. (Compare with the bottom edge of Gisela's Rocky River.) And I'm just a bit confused by the lighting on the upper-right-most leaf on the plant. It almost looks like it comes out of the leaf below it, and falls away from the viewer. The far (or right) perhaps should be lighter, at least if I'm reading the shape right.
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Old 02-11-2000, 01:49 PM
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Thank you, Drew. This triangle is a mistake of my digital camera. I still can't hadle it pretty well. There's none on the canvas.
As for the light, may be, you're right. I'll try to make it right. Thanks a lot.

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