Lone Wolf

[edith]

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Here is more than just a head. Comments welcome as always. Many thanks.

[Gisele]

I really like what you've done so far.Are you looking for help in something specific about it?I think you've done very well so far!
Gisele

[ReNae]

Edith,

I think you're doing a great job here, but what is the center of interest? The wolf isn't. You need to bring him to center stage. He's too light, kinda fades out. And where's his legs?

Warmth,
ReNae

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The bird sings not because it has an answer. The bird sings for it has a song.

[This message has been edited by ReNae (edited January 21, 2001).]

[edith]

Thanks for the comments. The centre of interest is the wolf. His legs are in the snow. my only problem was the joining.

[ReNae]

Edith,

Bring him out some more with color. If he is in the snow, then he needs a shadow to plant him there.

It is looking great, btw.

Warmth,
ReNae

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The bird sings not because it has an answer. The bird sings for it has a song.

[dduchene]

Edith i agree with renae...he seeme to be floating there...bring some of the sky colours into the snow...and give him a shadow...the snow reflects the sky just as water would...it is never actually white...but it influenced by all things around it. Also if he is in the snow the folliage is a bit confusing...not too many bushes like that in full leaf when the snow flies...an early snow in early autumn perhaps?
overall it is a very good effort, the wolf looks very natural the way he is entering the clearing and checking out the observer.

good work edith.

Darrell