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Old 09-14-2002, 01:24 AM
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yellow carnations

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Title: yellow carnations
Year Created: 2002
Medium: Acrylic
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 16x20
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

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wife hated this....

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posted elsewhere before, is it that bad, or ....
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Old 09-14-2002, 09:41 AM
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I like the yellow and the blue. Not sure about the red, though. The frames on the table make me happy.....
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Old 09-14-2002, 03:11 PM
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the horizontal complex makes the whole thing more busy.
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Old 09-14-2002, 03:55 PM
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First of all SORRY SORRY SORRY ordie4 but you may have noticed that I have been taking you for a woman all the time.........

As to your painting; I like the red but would add some darker yellows in SOME of the flowers and fade out a little the brown of the table (?). Anyone else of this opinion ? Or am I too picky ?
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Old 09-14-2002, 09:13 PM
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I like this but I would really enjoy it more if there were expressions on the people in the photos as my eye is lead there.
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Old 09-15-2002, 04:20 PM
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it is busy...but that is not the issue...(especially for you)
being disconected is...

your other work is so mad-cap wonderful
maybe you are trying too hard this time

as for this piece...
*contrast...in flowers particularly, as mensioned
*simplifiy the background as J mensioned
*unify the colors...relate them...to connect the piece...
*the orange/ red of curtains and flowers...maybe even put
some of that color idea into the table
*the blue sticks out too much...perhaps add some of the
green into the blue...or more blue all around...or...

I think you get the idea...?
it is good to experiment...just keep trying...

and do not abandon your mad-cap style either...
I am very fond of it!
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