Jane McDonald

[BOB G]

comments please on my version of Jane Painting isA4 250grms

[Yorky]

A lovely singer, we saw her live a couple of weeks ago,

I don't think her face is quit so long and her mouth is not quite centred.

Here's an image on the web.

Doug

[rue d'oak]

Consider shifting the hair a bit. I can see in the source photo linked above that her hair style does come in whisps under her chin. Yet your brush lines are so parallel and consistent, that it distracts my eye and introduces the notion that these could be shadow, contour lines rather than hair.

Jen

[charliedawg]

Hi Bob - you have captured the vivacity of this lively lady - somewhere on the site there is a portrait demo by Atlee - well worth a look.