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Old 08-12-2009, 01:36 PM
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Old Red Barn

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GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Old Red Ba<br>
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Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 9X12
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Work assignment using only 1 inch flat to loosen me up. I did this from memory, no photo! I wanted to create something unusual so I painted over a practice piece leaving some of the old color in the new painting. The upper left looked unfinished but then I thought it looked like a storm coming down the hill toward the ba<br> bringing rain, so I left it alone.

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Is it too busy? Any comments are appreciated.
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Old 08-12-2009, 02:15 PM
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Re: Old Red Barn

I like the way you vary the colors in the different forms. Is it too busy? I think yes in the foreground. You've handled that with patches of color which don't read right to me. Otherwise, the "degree of busyness" looks fine.

Two other points. The colors are awful bright for an old barn. And the perspective of he barn is substantially off. Note how the roof line is lower on the left than on the right and now the three openings seem to face the viewer while the ones on the right should be oblique.
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Old 08-12-2009, 02:29 PM
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Re: Old Red Barn

I like the lively colors you have used here. Agree with what TG posted above. The other thing I'd like to see is perhaps a stronger value shift from the light side of the barn to the dark side. That would also include the foreground detail.
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Old 08-12-2009, 06:54 PM
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Re: Old Red Barn

The camera brought out the red for some reason. I didn't use a flash. the painting is much more muted on the barn. I guess I should have brought the right side of the roof lower. The light is from directly overhead so there is not much shadow. Thanks all for the help!
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