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Old 05-07-2009, 01:57 AM
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Logging Road

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Title: Logging Road
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Medium: Oil
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Dimension: 10
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MY COMMENTS:
This painting was done in January from a photo I took of an old logging road near my cottage. I feel that it lacks something, perhaps color?

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
As I recently started painting, I would appreciate feedback on this work, particularly the composition. Thanks.
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Old 05-07-2009, 02:00 AM
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Re: Logging Road

Recently started painting? This is already outstanding. The snow is wonderful. Perhaps you could need a bit more definition in the trees?
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Old 05-07-2009, 02:43 AM
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Re: Logging Road

Hi Judith and welcome to WetCanvas
You have only started painting you say ....well somehow I feel you are going to be an excellent artist. This is lovely .... what a romantic spot .....I just want to walk along that path in the snow and up in through the trees ....gorgeous .....post more of your work soon!
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Old 05-07-2009, 07:03 AM
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Re: Logging Road

Excellent work on that little path, you did the light and shadows perfectly.
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Old 05-07-2009, 07:10 AM
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Re: Logging Road

The composition is just fine and the trees are wonderfully depicted. You've really nailed the somewhat jumbled colors and forms of a winter grove. On the snow, I'd suggest cooler, bluer tones in the shadows. The snow is looking just a bit like whipped cream and what causes this, I think, is the rather warm tones you've used.
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Old 05-07-2009, 11:02 AM
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Re: Logging Road

I love the thick snow.
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Old 05-07-2009, 12:07 PM
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Re: Logging Road

it is successful painting.....like it
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Old 05-07-2009, 02:34 PM
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Re: Logging Road

I think the snow is rendered well. The trees are too much of an solid mass - the top quarter of the pic has very little interest. Here's a digital edit...




As well as adding some sky, I increased the contrast around the bottom of the nearest bunch of trees.

The colour of shadows in the snow are very influenced by the colour of the sky - yours look OK to me for an overcast day with the sun peeping through.

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Old 05-07-2009, 03:35 PM
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Re: Logging Road

Thanks to everyone for taking the time to reply. It's hard sometimes, working alone, with no constructive feedback. I feel somewhat more confident that I'm on the right track. And, Graham, I agree with you that some sky should be showing. I struggled with that in the beginning because in the photo there is no sky as the backdrop is a mountain. But, artistic license! I'm told the trick is learning what to exclude and what to add...
Thanks again.
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Old 05-07-2009, 03:59 PM
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Re: Logging Road

I like it both with the sky and without it. This is nicely balanced. I think I'd get rid of that little stick in the left mid ground. It seems out of place and distracts.

Very n ice work here!
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Old 05-07-2009, 05:16 PM
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Re: Logging Road

I really like this. The job on the snow is very good. I too would cover the stick to the left as you look at the painting. Very nice, Thanks for Sharing.
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Re: Logging Road

Hi Judith.....what a great first post......I like this a lot....
I too like it with or without sky.....and would edit the twig as well.....
the edge of the ditch..... (that no doubt has a trickle of snowmelt in it)...and the sled track meeting make a nice composition....
if you edit the twig I would be sure to keep that shadow there to keep my eye from following them off the canvas...?
the snow is exceptional........can't wait to see more of your posts.....yd
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Old 05-08-2009, 01:00 AM
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Re: Logging Road

Welcome to WC, and I hope we see more work like this from you!
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Old 05-08-2009, 08:24 AM
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Hello from another newbie. I have seen this scene many times. You have painted it beautifully.
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Old 05-09-2009, 02:01 AM
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Re: Logging Road

Nice work Judith, very convincing. I guess I;m the odd one out as I like the stick in the path. Lets see more.............Lenore
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