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Old 03-24-2009, 04:19 PM
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Spring Air


Acrylic on canvas, 16"X20"
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Old 03-25-2009, 12:09 AM
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Re: Spring Air

THE CONCEPT IS GREAT. it needs something, maybe depth? not darkness but more value changes from front to back to give it depth?
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Old 03-25-2009, 11:09 AM
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Re: Spring Air

The earlier pictures were a little bit washed out. I painted another one and did some reworking...Here are both of them, lots of "spring air" here


Thanks for looking!
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Old 03-27-2009, 06:33 AM
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Re: Spring Air

The strength of the colours work better in the second painting, if I have a problem with this one I think that the action in the image is not using all the available canvas, the edges do not seem to be adding anything to the overall compostion. Of course that may well be your intention, in which case ignore what i have just said.
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Old 03-27-2009, 08:50 PM
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Re: Spring Air

The vertical views are very reminiscent of Georgia O'Keefe for me. Nice colour palette.
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Old 03-28-2009, 09:18 AM
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Re: Spring Air

Thank you everyone!
I was planning to frame them (unfortunately they are on canvas with side staples) so I tried to let some space on the sides - not to loose design parts at framing time how it usually happens to me ...I tried to plan with all that air to my head:-)
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