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joon0902 · #1 07-25-2002, 10:57 AM

Another rudimentary effort, not knowing about color, composition and the like....how do I improve it ???? thanks for taking the time and looking .....

jayne

**pampe** · #2 07-25-2002, 11:04 AM

HI, Jayne

it's very pretty....and your composition look good

what size is this and what type paper?

Pam

Sylvielu · #3 07-25-2002, 11:09 AM

You might add darks. I see only light and medium tones.

Little Old Lady · #4 07-25-2002, 09:02 PM

Very nice loose flowers. Agree that some darks and contrast would help,
JoAnn

NorahT · #5 07-25-2002, 10:15 PM

Nice loose technique and lovely colours - agree it could use a few darks.

Southern Style · #6 07-25-2002, 11:29 PM

Very pretty pastel colors.. so don't go too dark with the darks if you add them.

artijan · #7 07-26-2002, 12:47 AM

Hi Jayne,

I like the diagonal look and colours of your flowers. Love floral paintings. I think you've been given good advice, can't think of any other improvements. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Jan

prairie painter · #8 07-26-2002, 01:35 AM

Hi Jayne- Very pretty start- perhaps darken some of the foliage to push it back a bit...

joon0902 · #9 08-05-2002, 08:44 AM

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions - i'm sorry not to have posted sooner, but i am transferring stuff from one puter to another - tons o fun ! i thought that i needed darker color in the leaves - i will try to improve it...btw - W-N paints, Strathmore 140 cp, 8.5 x 11. thank you again

jayne

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