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Old 07-19-2008, 09:45 AM
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Marsamxett Harbour 1

Hi,

This is Marsamxett Harbour in Malta.



Paper: Bockingford 300gsm
Colors: Reeves & WN Cotman Student

C&C wlecome!

Thanks,
Ivan

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Old 07-19-2008, 11:38 AM
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Re: Marsamxett Harbour 1

Hello Ivan,
Welcome to the Watercolor Forum.

This is a lovely seascape and an interesting composition. I like the colors you've used and the way you have the town and cliff reflecting in the nicely-painted water.

Since you've posted this in the Studio, I assume you are still working on it. In that case, you might want to put some of the color from the little boat in its reflection just as you used the color from the cliff in its reflection in the water. Seeing the boat floating all alone makes me wonder what happened to the fisherman.

I like the suggestion of a hillside behind the village shrouded in mist and fog.

How big is your painting?

Sylvia
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Old 07-19-2008, 01:46 PM
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Re: Marsamxett Harbour 1

Yes, lots of potential here, I would darken the boat a little too.

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Old 07-20-2008, 06:07 PM
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Re: Marsamxett Harbour 1

This is a lovely start. Here is what I would suggest that you experiment with. It should make the painting look better and should help you play around with your colours a bit more if you do it.

1. Wet each of the stone sides with pure water (one at a time). Once it is damp, stand the painting at a 45 degrees, and drop a small deop of grayed earth colour in the bottom right corner of the stone side. Let the colour do it's thing. If you are careful and don't add too much water to your colour drop, you should get a very nice and natural shadow.

Now let it dry, turn your painting upside down (still at the 45 degrees) wet the entire sky with pure water starting between the buildings and pulling down. Let the water soak a bit, then drop some concentrated cobalt blue or similar blue between the buildings and just above the roofs and let it spread to the rest of the sky. If you use your brush VERY lightly, you can guide it as well. leave it alone and let it dry.

Now take some very light veridian or some cold green almosta tint no colour almost and cover the steeple and the dome. Let it dry and cover again but this time modeling (cover the right area only) and model it to look three dimentional.

Your other houses should also have shadows on the right side and light (leave alone) on the left. I agree with Doug that your boat should be darker especially on the bottom area.

Have fun and please consider the above for what it's worth. Just enjoy yourself!
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Old 07-21-2008, 01:19 AM
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Re: Marsamxett Harbour 1

Thanks fr the great tips. I will do a second version using these suggestions!

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