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Old 02-29-2008, 02:10 AM
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Midnight in the Crabapples

Hello, all--

I'm relatively new to pastels, and new to trying to do art full time, and new to these forums. This isn't my best work, so perhaps not the best introduction, but I'm looking for suggestions on how it could be better.



I've been experimenting with various papers, and tried a medium gray Velour for this one (not a paper I can imagine using very often, but it was in the sample pack I purchased), 8.5x11 inches.

I painted the raccoon almost in black and white because that's how it looked in the darkness. That's one of the things I'd like feedback about. I'm also not sure she looks adequately attached to the tree?

There's a great story that goes with the image, so I'll offer it as entertainment in return for feedback:

I had just gone to bed when the clatter started. Something was rummaging through some empty plastic buckets I have stacked behind my house for use in garden work. I suspected raccoons, got up and grabbed my flashlight, but the batteries were dead. There was no moon and it was inky black outside except for stars. Then I heard something on the roof, and branches of the crabapple tree just outside my window were scraping against it. Suddenly there was the sound of a branch breaking, a big thump, a disgruntled growl, and finally silence.

About that time I heard deer approaching, the sound of hooves clear on the cold ground. I still couldn’t see anything, but deer had been coming by every day to see if any of the last crabapples had fallen to the ground.

After a couple of minutes, I heard a loud, “Whoof! Whoof! Whoof!” from something moving from behind my house toward the tree. The deer scrambled a few yards away, as surprised by the sound as I was. I heard something, probably the raccoon, scrambling up the crabapple tree. I realized later it had "barked" to get the deer to back away. Gradually the deer began moving back under the tree.

By now my curiosity was overwhelming me. I didn’t want to go outside (it was cold, and the sound of a door sometimes disrupts the wildlife), so I decided to try taking a flash photo. The tree is only a few feet away from my window, so I thought a flash might be enough light to see what was happening there. I put the lens against the window to minimize the reflection from the flash, and clicked to focus. To my delight, the red focus light was enough to show me a little of what was happening. A very large mother raccoon was in the tree, with at least one young one, and I could see the backs of the deer foraging beneath the tree. It was a busy night!

Using the red focus light, I was able to aim the camera and get a couple of photos with enough detail to use as references for this pastel painting.

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Nancy
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Old 02-29-2008, 07:59 AM
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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

How cute is this!!! The crabapples are a great color contrast to the black and white. It may be me but the limb going across the animals face is a bit distracting to me. I wonder if it would be better just suggested on eliminated. I think it would make the face more a focal point.
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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

Welcome to the pastel forum, Nancy! Entertainment and art--love it!

I like the amusing look on the raccoon's face here, sort of frustrated yet determined. Her grasping paw is working well. I guess for me the fact that she's got her other paw holding onto such a slim branch makes it look a little tenuous, although when I reason it out I notice that having that grabbing arm over the branch is what's holding her up there... I think I'd make that one branch more substantial, since you asked. I don't think you need more color in the raccoon. Night pretty much kills colors. In fact, I wonder if you don't want to kill the saturation of color on the crabapples that are peripheral to the ones she's reaching for... In the digital here the top right hand ones are quieter, which is what I'm thinking. Those on the far left side seem kind of bright--probably the photo! Anyway, just my thoughts...

Hope to see more of your work! And we always like a good story, too...

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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

Thanks for the feedback! I'll see what I can do to tune up the painting.

I'm working on a sequel, too. The next photo I took captured the raccoon holding the branch she's reaching for in this painting, with her tongue wrapped around one of the crabapples.

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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

Nifty painting! Raccoons are amazing. Ours drink the hummingbirds water.
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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

Lovely introduction! A great story, and the little thief is caught wonderfully with pastel, right in the act. Charming! Agree with Deborah, if you let the target crabapples be more intense in colour than the surrounding ones, it'll be a perfect picture!

Do show, and tell, more!
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Re: Midnight in the Crabapples

This is really quite cute, makes me smile remembering the ones that I caught at 2 am one morning eating the neibors grapes.
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