|
|
 |
|
|

09-19-2007, 07:42 AM
|
|
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 184
|
|
|
Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Hi everyone, this is my first post of a painting here & any feedback is welcome.
This is colored pencil on Bristol Vellum & is about 5x7". CP is not my usual medium so C&C is gratefully accepted.
The background is actually a very dark green & not the olive green shown here.
Thanks for looking,
ABA
|

09-19-2007, 11:41 AM
|
 |
A WetCanvas! Patron Saint
Mesa, AZ
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 3,644
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Nice cropping. I like it.
|

09-19-2007, 12:46 PM
|
 |
Immortalized
Michigan
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 4,140
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
ABA, i really like this crop! the vellum seems to have helped to create the softness of the petals. you did well to make the surface work for you.
|

09-19-2007, 03:15 PM
|
 |
Lord of the Arts
Christchurch, New Zealand
|
|
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 2,645
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
This composition gives the feeling of a very delicate bloom. Very well done. I'd like to see some brighter highlights perhaps, just on the edges of the already highlighted areas. This will give it more impact as it appears in the sun.
Great work.
__________________
Elaine
My Website
|

09-19-2007, 06:02 PM
|
 |
A Local Legend
NE Oklahoma
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 6,772
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Very nice, I agree about the interesting crop - CP seems very challenging and time consuming!
__________________
Celeste Vaught
C & C Welcome
|

09-19-2007, 06:43 PM
|
 |
A Local Legend
So. California
|
|
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 8,472
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
I love the composition...and the petals are just beautiful. Sometimes the type of lights or if you used a flash with throw the colors off.
Oh I love your SN "artist by accident" that is so creative and cute!
__________________
Deb
Canon 5D Mark II, 24-70L &other Lenses, Speedlite 580EX, Alien Bee's lights, with wireless triggers and soft boxes umbrellas.
www.DebBrookshier.com
|

09-20-2007, 07:28 AM
|
|
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 184
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Thanks for your comments & suggestions. I'm working on them now. CP is a challenge & very time-consuming!
My screen name fits as I never expected to get into art as much as I have.
ABA
|

09-20-2007, 08:18 AM
|
 |
Moderator
Oakwood, Ohio, near Dayton.
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2002
Posts: 36,603
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Hi ABA,
I really like this macro composition for the red zinnia. Beautiful work on the form of the petals and the lovely shadows.
What medium do you normally work in since CP isn't the usual one? You did a terrific job with it.
Sylvia
|

09-20-2007, 12:32 PM
|
|
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 184
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
I think I've gone about as far with this as I can. I know it's still not as good as it could be but I'm just skating across the surface trying to add any more color. Thanks to everyone for the help - while it's not perfect, it looks a lot better.
Sylvia, I really haven't done much in any medium for quite a while but I lean toward watercolor and acrylic inks. I'm sure you can tell why I like the inks as this zinnia shows that I like vibrant color!
ABA
|

09-20-2007, 04:06 PM
|
 |
Moderator
North East England.
|
|
Join Date: Oct 2003
Posts: 36,470
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Rather nice ABA! I like the crop and the colour - and it's quite difficult to get the tones right with cp - very time-consuming; but I think you've done a really good job on this.
Like you, I love acrylic inks for their saturation . Hard to beat! ... but I also like CPs for their ease of use! 
|

09-20-2007, 04:09 PM
|
 |
Immortalized
Phoenix, AZ
|
|
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 4,532
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
WOW, this is great! And with pencils...amazing!
__________________
www.wallsurprises.com
In this economy the trick is to determine a need from a want!
|

09-20-2007, 06:06 PM
|
 |
A WetCanvas! Minion!
Beautiful Northern Alberta
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2002
Posts: 1,822
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Hi ABA, welcome to the forum. What a dramatic entrance! This is very striking and I can't believe it is pencils!! they have sure come a long way since I used them last! Well done.
|

09-20-2007, 07:04 PM
|
 |
Enthusiast
Denmark, Sydals
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2003
Posts: 1,583
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Hi ABA
Thanks for sharing your happy and brigth drawing.
|

09-20-2007, 07:45 PM
|
 |
WC! Guide
In the heart of The Pearl (Portland OR)
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 5,328
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Welcome! Love the crop!!
|

09-21-2007, 09:45 AM
|
|
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: May 2004
Posts: 184
|
|
|
Re: Red Zinnia - X-Posted in CP Forum
Thank you all for the kind words & warm welcome. I also appreciate all the help with this piece.
ABA
|
| Thread Tools |
|
|
| Display Modes |
Linear Mode
|
|