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Old 07-14-2007, 09:59 PM
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Hi Everyone, I've had some requests to put up a demo of my painting process. This is my first demo and I probably have too many steps, but I will post all of them because it may help to show how it develops better than I can. This is a scene of Fort Snelling viewed across the Minnesota River. The smaller tributary is the Mississippi river. This is a confluence of the two rivers. Here's a photo of the scene



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First step is always the same for me. I start with a very quick sketch. If the composition doesn't work in this small sketch, no amount of slick painting or massive technique will save it. It's better to know now than two hours from now when I've been beat up by the canvas. The sketch is a quickie and is all about composition and balance. An unequal distribution of sizes and shapes.


As you can see I've condensed the scene quite a bit. Fort Snelling has been picked up and moved far to the left. There was just too much unnecessary foliage, so it's gone. It's always about what makes the painting better and it's not necessary to be a slave to what's in front of you.

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Here's my rough in with a few of the darkest darks. I tone my canvas with thinned down yellow ocher. This is a great way to keep your paintings from becoming too dark. If you let little pieces of this underpainting show through in spots, you can give your painting a lot of life. Don't do this in the distant hills since yellow is the first thing to drop out in receding landscape. Cover all of you underpainting there.




I usually only draw in my larger shapes with Cad Red Med thinned with turp, but since this scene involved architecture, I lightly sketched in the Fort and some of the other shapes. This is the time to be critical of your drawing. I've seen Scott Christensen draw with his brush and wipe it off over and over and over again until he had his shapes different and interesting. That made a big impression on me and I never forgot it!
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Now it's about laying in the darks, comparing one to another.



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...continuing the lay in. Just getting the values right at this point. I can't stress enough the importance of comparing the values to each other. I've heard a statistic that 90% of failed PA paintings are due to faulty values!



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...now I begin to put in the light areas and the flat planes. This include the shoreline and the water. Also I've begun to put the shadowed side of the Fort. Every so often the fort fires it's cannons for the crowds that flock there for a little bit of history. Luckily they aren't firing them in my direction.



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...my initial lay in is complete. If i was going for a looser sketch, I could stop here. From this study I could do a larger painting in the studio. I'm wanting more of a finished painting, so I'll keep going. There are no details in the Fort and I was playing with putting in a flag, so I roughed one in.

Nothing here was finished first, it all came together at the same pace. Don't obsess about any one area of a painting. Let it all happen together.



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I decide I don't like the flag, so I remove it, sorry.

I've put in some of the clouds at this point. I'm also sneaking up on adding detail to the fort. I'm constantly adjusting values to create the light effect I'm seeing. I also put in a few tree trunks in the foreground to see if the trees are reading right.



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....the refining continues. Bringing things together at the same time. Don't concentrate and finish any one area. Orchestrate it.



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....adding detail to the fort, but not too much. Also tweaking the light side of the trees.




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...adding tree trunks to the shoreline and further defining the leaves . The violet reflection of the sky in the water is taken care of. I've darkened the shadowed wall in the fort. We're coming down the home stretch now!




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I haven't put it in yet, but there is a bridge behind the Fort that connects to the hill on the right side. The reason I haven't put it in is because I'm not sure if I want this to be a period piece set in the 1800's (no bridge), or do I make it a current day painting, and include that bridge. I opt for adding the bridge since it will help to connect the composition and bring keep your eye from wandering off the top.

Here's the finished painting:



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And finally, here are a couple of closeups:







Thanks for stickin' with me!!

Happy Painting, Steve
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Old 07-14-2007, 10:46 PM
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Steve,

Super fantastic! Thanks for doing this, and showing the detail at each step. I learned something at each step. What amazed me is how you kept going. I would have been pretty happy with myself at panel 6, just after you removed the flag (good decision, IMO). Even at panel 9, I'd be patting myself on the back and saying, good job. But the additional decoration in the last really makes it come alive.

It looks like your original darks in the shadows of the trees on the far bank made it without change. (?).

In panel 3, where you talk about values, what are you comparing as your light values? Your darks don't change much through the rest of the painting, but you add quite a few light colors on top...

Thanks so much for taking the time to do this one. I know it took a whole evening. It was well worth it!

Thank you!
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Steve... holy snappin' turtles!!... This is a great progression to see. Thanks for posting your working process... and the play by play... generous info for us all. Oh and the final result is a fine piece! Can I ask you how much time you spent on this one and the dimension?

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Marvelous, after a loooonnnnggggg await sleep in day!!!!!! yay!!!!! Good by 60 hour work weeks!!!!!!! makes me wish id gone!!!!

Back the the meaning, I like the demo and it purpose of helping others in the madness of creating a painting.... I think every one is different.... I on the other hand will fail at a painting like you talk of SC and the drawing aspect. I feel to me a this time drawing is the greatest thing. I just got done with that event today and the pastel enlargement of the Dock Cafe DRAWING was way off and that made me mad....:>( I worked hard and fast and tried not to overdue it and it happened... But someone bought it and didnt care much about that and all proceeds went into geting some kid with unGodly talent into school where he could us it so its all good.

My thoughts are great painting and REALLY love the fact you moved the fort. hell if you were down about 300 yards thats the scene youd have :>) Great painting and good eye for creating something that is removed and moved in from acuality. We paint to make a better acualtiy for people and you did it!!!!1

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Re: Plein Air Demo...

thanks steve, nice work on a tough subject. Also interested in how much time and size. Thanks for posting.

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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Wonderful demo, Steve! Also really enjoyed perusing your website and blog. As a frustrated studio watercolo and acrylic painter attempting to learn more about plein air in various media, I can't tell you how helpful these WIP's are to those of us still struggling to find our niche. Kudos!!!

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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Just awesome! I love the way that you explained your steps. The results are amazing!
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This rocks Steve! Excellent demo and a gorgeous finished painting. Sweet!
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Steve
Thanks for posting the demo. I learned alot from it. I really liked how you took a scene and changed it around so that it would be a good painting. What was you palette on this? Do you use Christensen limited palette or a more expanded one? Keep up the good work.
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Thanks Steve, I an not an oil painter, but I appreciate the thought that was put into the demo and the excellent descriptions of each stage.

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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Thanks Steve. Great stuff. Thanks for posting!
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Thanks Everyone, I'm off to paint this morning but I wanted to mention that this was an 11X14 and the time was about 2 hours. I'll write later when I've more time. Also, the values on the finished painting are a little washed out in this photo and in reality are more like the previous steps.

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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Thanks a lot Steve, I was asking and waiting for a demo of yours!!!!

I have a question about your sketch technic? Are you doing the first sketch in pencil? I was reading somewhere that graphit from a pencil is moving up
through the oil layers later, have you noticed any problems using a pencil as sketch tool?


thanks and cheers
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

fantastic steve,very,very informative
i always skip the tumbnail sketch so it is good to be reminded of that again
(me placing things center)

and the end result is marvelous

do you use different grounds for different weathers
like what ground for rainy grey days?

thanks!
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Re: Plein Air Demo...

Steve,
This is so terrific! Thanks for putting it together.

It is so helpful to see how a painting comes together. Your comments are really great, too, as they reveal a bit of what's in your head at each stage.

And the result is outstanding.
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