Papi's fishing camp

[tremblad]

Hello everyone,

Here this week attempt.



Not very happy with this one. I think there are two main problems (among the numerous problems an expert could see!).

1) the overall composition is not the best I could get. I should have used an angle with more perspective ...

2) The overall color scheme is too dark. I don't feel the light in this attempt. The dark spot at the left is also disturbing me. A second working session would be able to correct this.

Feel free to comment ...

Have a nice week-end to all of you.

[TTHOMPIE]

On the right side of the painting there seems to be a second trailer that is EXACTLY in line with the one behind it.

If I'm right. That's something you want to watch out for in the future. One item lining up exactly with another item......is a no no I think. You could leave the building out and add a tree?

I like the painting and hope you repost after you make whatever changes you plan on making.