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Old 04-22-2005, 03:37 PM
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Title: barn and sunflowers
Year Created: 2005
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
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this is a peice done in water color and pen and ink

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Old 04-22-2005, 03:50 PM
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Re: barn and sunflowers
Dear Neeki,
I like the way you've rendered the sunflowers. Darkening the background helped them to stand out. May I suggest that you also darken underneath the eave on the right hand side to suggest an overhang? I also like your composition.
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Old 04-22-2005, 11:04 PM
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Re: barn and sunflowers
I like the painting but I think it could use more contrast.
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Old 04-23-2005, 01:22 AM
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Re: barn and sunflowers
Beautiful work.....love the detail and suggestion of fragility...the sunflowers are wonderful...
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Old 04-23-2005, 02:52 PM
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Re: barn and sunflowers
Another reply ... another opinion
I miss a window in the barn's wall or something to break up that important surface.
Nice and direct style nevertheless ...
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