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Old 12-02-2004, 10:17 AM
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GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: Landscape
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Watercolor
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 11X15 inches
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

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I don't think this is the best thing I've ever done.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
Any view welcome...
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Old 12-02-2004, 10:21 AM
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Re: Landscape

very fluent , nice rhythm
(take care that those eraser marks don't take over as a trick)
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Old 12-02-2004, 10:28 AM
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Re: Landscape

I find the washy x's distracting from an otherwise brilliant piece.. "hazy shades of winter"
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Old 12-02-2004, 05:23 PM
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Re: Landscape

the thing about the washy x's relates to the whole state of mind thing in artistic expression.
lots of rich underlay here
I see what you mean
it might be the effect of the ankle - pain.
still it is honest work and valid in its own right.
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Re: Landscape

i like the rhythm of lines
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Old 12-03-2004, 08:18 AM
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Application flows like a river and the palette is wonderful. I would've liked to have seen the trees without the lines, but as Jerry said; It is honest and valid in its own right.
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Old 12-03-2004, 09:19 AM
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Re: Landscape

Thanks for the views everyone. And I get the point about the lines.

I felt that without them the colours were too strong and in your face. Since it is an imaginary landscape I thought the criss crosses sort of distance the image... like one is seeing it through glass.
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