on the range

[Pilan]

MY IMAGE(S):



GENERAL INFORMATION:
Title: on the range
Year Created: 2004
Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 5 x7
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
ugh! trying to complete some things I started a few years ago.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
should I push the trees back further. The foreground is a bit lighter. Is it too warm?
what else?
thanks

[Dana Design]

Pilan, the large tree is really well done! I like it. The other trees need just a tiny bit more definition and a variance of color. The large tree is the background doesn't quite seem to fit amongst the others in the bg.

I wouldn't say the foreground is too warm but you might want to add a bit of interest there also. I do like the feeling of a rolling landscape.

Very nice! Keep working on it until you're happy!

[Pilan]

yes your correct. I think the tree in the background escaped me. I was thinking about adding interest as well. Let me think on this one and I will fix the tree.

Thank you for the added statement [ Keep working on it until you're happy! ] you know that really is all it is, until I'm happy. So simple isn't it.

Originally Posted by Dana Design

Pilan, the large tree is really well done! I like it. The other trees need just a tiny bit more definition and a variance of color. The large tree is the background doesn't quite seem to fit amongst the others in the bg.

I wouldn't say the foreground is too warm but you might want to add a bit of interest there also. I do like the feeling of a rolling landscape.

Very nice! Keep working on it until you're happy!

[Gilberte]

You've got a nice palette here. Except for the far big tree which seems to be somewhat of proportionwise, I wouldn't change much ...

[Pilan]

gilberte, i am going to do this today. I like this. thanks for the input .



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