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    DominicM
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        One I am working on as a possible commission, anyone see anything glaringly wrong,
        still got some vertical stripes to put on the staircase to do and ant tweaks

        theres also this one, but think may have lost rear cat, again all thought, comments and advice welcome

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        #903119

        I’m no expert Dominic but the first one is a better composition.

        Doug


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        #903121

        I too prefer the first one because of the composition.
        In the second the pose of the cat in the foreground is very typical and well caught, but the body and cast shadows seem to be inconsistent to my eyes.
        And of course the title is charming too.

        Esther

        #903120
        ErnstG
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            Wonderfully, the two “Stubentiger = house cat”!

            Ernst


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            #903122
            BlissC
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                I’d echo what the others have said. The unusual “pose” of the first looks like a better composition to me too. It’s certainly got more visual interest, and puts the two troublemakers in context.

                Rachel
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