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November 2, 2019 at 6:36 pm #479852
One I am working on as a possible commission, anyone see anything glaringly wrong,
still got some vertical stripes to put on the staircase to do and ant tweaks
theres also this one, but think may have lost rear cat, again all thought, comments and advice welcome
DominicM Art
All Comments and Criticism welcomed, love it or hate it, I wish to know so I can improve
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Never deprive someone of hope - it may be all they have. - Unknown.November 3, 2019 at 8:39 am #903119I’m no expert Dominic but the first one is a better composition.
Doug
We must leave our mark on this worldNovember 3, 2019 at 10:23 am #903121I too prefer the first one because of the composition.
In the second the pose of the cat in the foreground is very typical and well caught, but the body and cast shadows seem to be inconsistent to my eyes.
And of course the title is charming too.Esther
November 3, 2019 at 1:18 pm #903120Wonderfully, the two “Stubentiger = house cat”!
Ernst
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Painting is not everything in life - but without painting everything is nothing!November 5, 2019 at 1:29 pm #903122I’d echo what the others have said. The unusual “pose” of the first looks like a better composition to me too. It’s certainly got more visual interest, and puts the two troublemakers in context.
Rachel
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