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    Artchrispy
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        Hi Still learning a new technique. This is mostly acrylic inks. The foreground rocks are tube acrylics. It looks better from a few feet back. The photos is a little blurry. This is the peak of Chimney Tops in the Smoky mountains, Tennessee. Comments crits welcome.

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        #605462
        Katie Black
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            Very nice indeed.

            Ok, I have to mention one thing. The rocks look a little too well placed/contrived IMHO. To counteract that could you place one more rock on top of two rocks, perhaps in a horizontal position.

            I meant to say I am referring to the four large boulders at the bottom of the painting.

            Katie Black Fine Art

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            Artchrispy
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                Very nice indeed.

                Ok, I have to mention one thing. The rocks look a little too well placed/contrived IMHO. To counteract that could you place one more rock on top of two rocks, perhaps in a horizontal position.

                Wow you are exactly right. I just Bob Rossed them in. . Ill need to fix that. Thanks! :)

                Christophervasil.com

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                Katie Black
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                    Isn’t it weird how sometimes you can be so close to a painting that you literally can’t see it!!

                    Recently I painted something and I just knew something was wrong with it..so I mentally check-listed everything, but I still couldn’t see it.

                    When I showed it to my daughter she immediately said..”your paintings divided almost in half” I thought WHAT? and sure enough that was the problem, it almost looked like two different paintings..how odd is that. :D

                    Katie Black Fine Art

                    "Life is far too important to be taken seriously." - Oscar Wilde

                    #605458
                    talisman
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                        That’s why this site is great…new eyes to see what we missed!
                        I like it and a fix on the rocks would make it great.


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                        Mary
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                            I like how you managed all the different greens.

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                            #605457
                            gaykir
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                                Unique! Agree about the rocks but that will be an easy fix. The rest is very nice.

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                                Looks good.

                                C&C always welcome. Michelle

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                                #605464
                                dave woody
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                                    The rocks don’t bother me, they could be real for all I know.

                                    I absolutely love the White skyline, top left corner colour dabbed superbly.

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