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Old 10-15-2015, 08:37 PM
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Fruit on Lettuce

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Title: Fruit on Lettuce
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Medium: Oil
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Dimension: 7x14
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Just finished this one. I tried to get the light source coming from the above left.

MY QUESTIONS FOR THE GROUP:
I'm trying to improve my composition. I'm open to an honest critique and suggestions of how this could be improved.
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Old 10-16-2015, 02:20 AM
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Re: Fruit on Lettuce

rich and adorable
the grapes on the left seem too large, could even be prune plums at the top left area
i'd like to introduce you to Delmus, who doesn't stop by often, but when he does i always learn something from his posts. he loves flowers and fruit, etc and is exceptionally good at them. the link is to a WC! list of posts he's started, various works, but there's one close to the top of the list with grapes in it. i think you'd enjoy looking over his stuff.

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Re: Fruit on Lettuce

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rich and adorable
the grapes on the left seem too large, could even be prune plums at the top left area
i'd like to introduce you to Delmus, who doesn't stop by often, but when he does i always learn something from his posts. he loves flowers and fruit, etc and is exceptionally good at them. the link is to a WC! list of posts he's started, various works, but there's one close to the top of the list with grapes in it. i think you'd enjoy looking over his stuff.

la

I know you are right about the grapes. I just got carried away, don't know why that happens to me sometime. I'll check out Deimus's posts. Thank you La.
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Old 10-19-2015, 05:35 PM
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Re: Fruit on Lettuce

I worked more on this one. I think it's better now.
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