Wow, thank you so much everyone!!
I'll have to sit on this one a bit and ponder the great feedback. I fixed the greenish/grayish thing in the back and it's already better. Agree that maybe a few variations of red would work.
Pam, thanks for the grayscale, I think you're right. Funny, the values looked fine in the underpainting
, but I guess because the green and red are fairly the same on a value scale, they seem to throw it off? I'll try to work a bit on that... this is due in a couple days, so hopefully I have time to fix that. If not, it'll be a learning experience for the next time!
Thanks for looking, everyone!