Re: Structured Crit; WIP: There's Gold in the Hills
i think you've got an overall marvelous bunch of stuff going on here ... good distance, nice comp and no, the row of bushes doesn't create too dominant a wall.
i've been back and looked at this a few times ... the blue/yellow combination jars me and i've not been able to become comfortable with it ... this is quite subjective tho as when i converted it to greyscale to check the values ... they're pretty bang on ... for a soft, romantic(ish) piece ... room (always) to push the depth of values, depending on what you're ultimately after ...
the grey scale for your considerations
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