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Old 03-16-2012, 04:20 AM
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Hello all...

This is my first Thread in WC.

I have tried to recreate a portrait of a lady using charcoal pencils (WIPs to follow)...

(I tried posting the WIPs in one go... But I had to post min. 2 posts before uploading any images.. .. So, I'll try spliting my post...)

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Old 03-16-2012, 04:20 AM
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View the pictures below and give your comments for improving it!!!

Hope you guys can view my new creation without any uploading errors !!

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Old 03-16-2012, 04:25 AM
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Old 03-16-2012, 04:34 AM
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-------------------------------------------- give advice on how to improve it... .. Thankx...
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Welcome to WetCanvas, vmac.
Good to see you jumping straight into posting a drawing. I am guessing the reference is a black and white photo? I think the nose shadow is too dark for this angle. If you look again at that area, you may see that you can soften it and give some shape to the nose in shadow.
You have good proportions, and a good range of tones.
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Thanks for the WIP.
I agree with Bethany. That nose is quite some chunk !! But I love the reflected light under the jawbone.
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Nice pose and i would like to comment that I am drawing a three quarter portrait from a photo right now and this has helped me to see how to fix a problem about the hairline I was having.thanks for posting!
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Wow I love seeing how your work progressed -- very cool to see for a newbie like myself, thanks for sharing!
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You have received good feedback - but I hope you will post your developments!

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Often what we see in a photo is much less than we see in reality. The human eye is a wonderful instrument, capable of identifying great numbers of nuances. In a shadow area, particularly, the camera flattens and eliminates many of the variations within, that would give more information about the shape. I tell my students to remember that the camera distorts. But, given that is all one can work from at certain times, I would suggest that you try to develop your drawing much more gradually, all over, rather than dwelling on one area for too long a time. Seeing the relationships between areas of a drawing as they develop as a whole can lead to a more unified look to a work. Avoid developing total black areas early. You may see a need to make one of them lighter than others and you would have no where to go to bring it back. Erasing too much leads to a very overworked appearance. It was nice to see how you worked on the piece in the stepped photos. It enabled me to offer this thought on another method or approach. Geo
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