Thanks - I agree , moving the main figure to the right might resolve matters . (That "lady" is in fact a manly pilot figure
). The whole thing is just a rough digital mock up and I hope the Acrylic on canvas version will look much better . The red planes are so close because it was a moment when The Red Arrows beat up our line for a bit of fun and they were very close and very low , probably lower than shown here - but helf 'n safety hadn't yet been invented back then!
You raise an interesting point ref the aircraft - to add some essence of action / speed I might have to blur one or other set of aircraft - not to mention the figures . Will consider .