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Old 08-01-2019, 10:03 AM
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my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

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Old 08-02-2019, 08:57 AM
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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

some tweaks

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Old 08-02-2019, 08:06 PM
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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

Adorable. Good skin tone. She has life in her.
Did the landlady accept this as rent for the month?
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Old 08-03-2019, 03:03 AM
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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

Excellent portrait, Mary, right out of the top drawer. I love the chiaroscuro effect and actually might have even considered upping the highlights to further emphasise the style. However, this looks absolutely beautiful to me, in every respect, with the features being perfectly aligned. I did wonder if the mouth was slightly misaligned but dismissed the thought as picky.

Fabulous work!!

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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

Thanks for these encouraging words! Fun idea about the rent.
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Old 08-08-2019, 10:47 AM
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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

small tweaks (sorry for the blurry pic)

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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

Absolutely love it! I like the colors, the (playful) brushwork and the way the light hits her face. A very endearing portrait and I think your landlady will be very happy!
I wonder if the contour lines of the neck are completely ok, but can't say without photo reference.
I think you captured the liveliness and skin tone very well.
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Old 09-10-2019, 10:28 AM
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Re: my landlady's daughter, earlier version posted in portraits

thanks! and thanks for that suggestion!
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