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    oats
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        Started feeling a little better yesterday and today. Still have this darn dry cough

        Kaylen please rip me apart on this I have to deliver soon and my head is a fog

        Jim
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        #904303
        Kaylen
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            I am having some personal ordeals this week myself and I hope for both of us to be back on track soon,,,my eye was drawn all the way to the left,because that is the lightest light and the darkest dark,then my eye quickly scanned and then was drawn back to the dog on the left and its noticeable that it has less detail in the chest area than the others

            Kaylen Savoie
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            #904302
            jcadams
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                In my opinion, I agree with Kaylen but would add the center dog has a plant growing out of his head. I would put the dark brown that is on the fence behind the center head too. That way there is a break between the top of the head and the plant. All the dogs have wonderful expressions. Good job on the faces!

                #904300
                oats
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                    Better?

                    Jim
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                    #904304
                    Kaylen
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                        sign it,,,I think this version is really improved,,,darkening that area between them and behind them was a good idea, it really separates them well from the background

                        Kaylen Savoie
                        https://www.savoieartist.com/
                        At least twice a year,paint something better than you ever painted before.

                        #904301
                        oats
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                            👍 thanks guys!

                            Jim
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                            BlissC
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                                Just a minor thing, but my eye was drawn to the centre dog, as he almost seems to be winking. There’s just something about his right eye (on the left as we’re looking at him) that makes that eye look smaller/partly closed in comparison to his other eye. I think maybe he’s missing just a tiny bit of shadow/dark lower eyelid.

                                They’re just lovely though. I hope you’re feeling better soon.

                                Rachel
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                                "Living on the edge...trying to not fall off - and painting outside the lines!"
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