"I have captured the beauty and tranquility of the area."
Can we move it up a notch?
Looked over your paintings on WC and I find you would be considered a 'figurative' painter.'
And so I can understand your question regarding the composition of this new painting.
Taking into account the prior comments - I submit something else could be addressed.
Let's start with what your title suggests - Away from the crowd
... open space, a brief vacation from reality.
So I'm going to suggest
- maybe ... it is not your composition that is the challenge of syncing your title to the painting.
It could be the realistic - figurative style
that you are comfortable with - is stopping one from suspending reality.
This is not a reflection on you or your talent as a painter.
It's just that over time and many years ... I have come to realize that a mood can be portrayed with many styles of painting.
I'm suggesting two possible painting styles that are just the 'cat's meow'
for the mood of open space ... that you want to convey ...
In this way ... your composition works just fine.
- I hope these suggestions give you pause...
Because from your prior work ... I believe - you could do this.