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  • February 11, 2020 at 2:34 pm #483898
    nha63
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        I just finished this one to submit for consideration in a show titled ‘Rhythm and Movement’; I like themed shows less than I like thinking of titles….it’s 11×14, Mount Visions and Art Spectrum UltraLights on Uart 400 dark; I find the dark paper seems to make the colors pop. Please let me know what you think – I’m still learning. Thanks very much for looking. Neal

        February 11, 2020 at 2:48 pm #946230
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            Neal, your color choices give us a cold Atlantic Breaker. The only suggestion I could give is where the water meets the sand, you could make the sand look wet. That’s being really picky :angel: and it is fine as is.

            [FONT="Comic Sans MS"]Karen, IAPS/MC, PSA WC Moderator-Pastels

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            February 11, 2020 at 3:51 pm #946232
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                Nicely done.
                The green in tho rolling wave is a nice touch.
                A bit more variation of greens and blues in the rest of the water could be nice.

                Esther

                February 12, 2020 at 8:09 am #946231
                franglais
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                    Lovely painting. I, too, feel that the dark UArt tends to make the colors pop. Good luck with the show!

                    Mike

                    February 13, 2020 at 8:19 pm #946229
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                        I don’t do many landscapes or seascapes but what stand out to me most are the footprints which seem to uniform. It may just be me. Love the wave. I can’t do water too well. Love the colors

                        Luvy
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