Re: Johannes - Student Critique Posts Only
After last Saturday's class and hearing you once again mention the importance of the middle ground, I went back into my big painting. I still felt I could do better. I took the suggestion of the rock on the right side by making it more pronounced to draw the viewer to the right and left and on up to the sky area ..least I hope I did . I put the figure more in shadow...added more small details in the landscape . Today I looked at it and said to myself I cannot add any more ..praying I did not overwork it too much.
This was a very big painting for me and quite the challenge . Took me about a month. I am getting tired of looking at it but if you see something I could improve, I will. Thank you Jo and everyone who helped me out with ideas and tips.
Critique and Comments always welcomed. It is how I grow into my art with a little help from my friends.