Thank you all for the wonderful feedback. I was not initially happy with it. I do better portraits in oil. Of course, oil allows for corrections to features along the way.
Anyway, I thought I'd give it one more go.. I made sure to measure the facial features with a ruler from the computer screen so that it is more precise. I hope it's a little better now? Also, I was able to be a little more in control of the colors on the face. I incorporated the feedback of showing a little more leg in the grass to overcome the "hovering" look. Also, I thought I'd made the grass a little less saturated this time. Some more freedom with the masking fluid.
Please let me know if this is ok. Thanks so much for all the help. I much appreciate it!