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Old 02-25-2018, 06:56 AM
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I need a feedback for a story that I write

The si-fi military story that I write have expanded to more then 100 pages and might be a book. The thing is I am not sure anyone but me perceives it while reading it as my style does not seem to match anything I have read.
Is there anyone here interested to dedicate a few minutes to read the first few pages?
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Old 02-25-2018, 10:30 AM
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Re: I need a feedback for a story that I write

Sure you could email to me if you want, but do more than first few pages at least 10 or 20.
I'll send you a pm with info.
There is a good writers site called Storywrite. They even have critique areas.
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Old 02-25-2018, 11:27 AM
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Re: I need a feedback for a story that I write

Thanks for the site. I posted a part of the story there. I have them written but there is constantly something I do not like so that is why i decided to turn for a feedback.
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Old 02-26-2018, 02:31 PM
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Re: I need a feedback for a story that I write

I'm a military SciFi fan. Give me a link and I'll review it for you.
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