Re: Abandoned Boat - Is there something wrong with this?
Overall, I think it is coming along nicely. Your color selection is good. Seems to me that if you are going for more of an impressionist work it is okay but if you are going for a more realistic work is needs some adjusting. It doesn't appear to be placed quite right ( to much of it is out of the water and above the shoreline). It would be nearly impossible for a boat to sit like that without some major propping from the back side of the boat. The shadows are a bit out of whack. It isn't attached to the water or the shore in a way that would make it believable. Seems that the angle of the boat may need some adjusting as well. Seems a bit wide for a dory and the ends (bow and stern) don't appear to curve properly. Reflections need some adjusting as well. Just my humble opinion of course.
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