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Old 06-24-2019, 06:49 PM
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Oil on canvas. 16”x20”. C & C welcome. Thanks.
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Old 06-25-2019, 08:57 AM
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Re: Hummingbird

Interesting array of objects. Very pleasing colors. Nice highlights on eggplant and water bottle. The garlic looks like it is floating in the box. Another garlic or more of the box could ground it.

I think the composition is weak. The christmas ball adds nothing. I'd actually cut the composition nearly in half - have it end by slicing through 2/3 of the lemon. The hummingbird is the last thing I saw, and the least relevant, but changing the name is easy.
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Old 06-28-2019, 01:12 PM
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Re: Hummingbird



A few changes...
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Old 06-29-2019, 09:46 PM
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Great colors and an interesting composition! Be careful with tangents where two lines or shapes appear to be touching and not overlapping (Christmas ball and edge of table, top of eggplant and rim of metal loaf pan...also left side hummer could be sitting on the edge of the brown shape which I guess is a chair?
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