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    I have this small still life 12×16 oil work. C&C are welcome.

    #838317

    Gorgeous set up and design with an old world feel, Moises, wow!

    Kay

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    #838321
    billmahler
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        Nice work, Moises.
        I especially like the colors

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        #838323

        KreativeK, Bill: Thank you.

        #838335
        zhm
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            This is simply lovely!

            I will give you some feedback though. The shadows on the flower lying on the table looks as if the light source is directly overhead whereas the cast shadow of the vase indicates the source is low and to the left of the picture plane.

            I see the wonderful perspective of the vase. The top is at eye level whereas the bottom is well elbow eye level. Nice! You might check the drawing of the eclipse of the bottom. Maybe a drawing improvement opportunity.

            Classic still life that anyone would be proud to possess!

            #838324

            This is simply lovely!

            I will give you some feedback though. The shadows on the flower lying on the table looks as if the light source is directly overhead whereas the cast shadow of the vase indicates the source is low and to the left of the picture plane.

            I see the wonderful perspective of the vase. The top is at eye level whereas the bottom is well elbow eye level. Nice! You might check the drawing of the eclipse of the bottom. Maybe a drawing improvement opportunity.

            Classic still life that anyone would be proud to possess!

            Thank you for your comments. The base of the vase has been fixed already. That was a good observation. The reference photo indicates the light source is above and coming from the left as the shadow of the metal ring can indicate.

            #838322
            AllisonR
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                Super yummy subtle warm and cool color shifts in the vase. Contrasts nicely with the much more saturated flowers. Dramatic. There may be a shadow in the far left in the reference, but it is a shadow from something that does not exist in your painting, nor does it add any useful info to your painting, so I would remove it.

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                #838325

                Thank you Allison, but I reworked this still life several days ago and this is the final job. I don’t see anything in the background though. Thank you for your comments.

                #838331
                IronPawn
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                    Hey Moe, how are you? Hope all is well, it has been a long time. Beautiful painting though.

                    All the best.

                    Zoran

                    #838326

                    Hey Moe, how are you? Hope all is well, it has been a long time. Beautiful painting though.

                    All the best.

                    Zoran

                    Hi Zoran, how are you? Thank you for your comments!

                    #838333

                    Excellent painting! Very engaging and elegant with expressive brushwork. The light is very convincingly coming from the left throughout the painting.

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                    Gav
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                        Nice subject and colours. looks great. love the feel of light picking out details and other parts lost in shadow.

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                        #838327

                        Excellent painting! Very engaging and elegant with expressive brushwork. The light is very convincingly coming from the left throughout the painting.

                        Thank you.

                        #838328

                        Nice subject and colours. looks great. love the feel of light picking out details and other parts lost in shadow.

                        Thank you Gav.

                        #838334
                        patrikeev
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                            Looks great.

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