Re: McDonald Lake revised
Very pleasing landscape, harry, with super depth. I think the mountains to the left look a bit washed out and perhaps the first line needs a nudge in the colour saturation department.
The reflections of the trees are not quite working, and I give a lot of latitude when it comes to reflections. The second tree from the left, the green one, looks fine but its reflection is at the wrong angle. It should angle the other way. The gold, autumnal looking tree is wide and bushy, yet its reflection looks like a sharp evergreen. The others are fine.
The sky's a bit wishy-washy, even if it IS accurate. Maybe try to intensify the colours or add something of interest, perhaps a simple blue would have more impact, given that its not a main player.
The shoreline, and foreground in general, is very nice indeed, perfect for this soft and ethereal scene.
Overall, a lovely landscape that could stand a shove here and there.
Last edited by Beemax : 08-09-2019 at 02:59 AM.