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Old 05-20-2002, 02:02 PM
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Apples

I am posting "apples" an acrylic 9 x 12 inch.
on canvas board.

This painting is a remake of the "Two Apples"
posted earlier in this forum.

Your comments are welcome.

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Old 05-20-2002, 05:18 PM
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very charming!
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Old 05-20-2002, 05:42 PM
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Old 05-21-2002, 03:00 AM
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this is excellently rendered but like with your geraniums i'd like to see a more interesting composition...you have the apples dead center which tends to make the rest feel unfinished. i showed a different way of cropping to make the apples more interesting and to lead your eye around.
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Old 05-21-2002, 05:43 PM
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Arlene

Thank you, for your comments.

I thought I had movement with space,
light and shadows.
I guess it was not enough.

Your cropping is very good, only the apples
became too big , I should be wonking on an
8 x 10 inch. panel.

I saw "Fruit Still Life" it's terrific, terrific, you have
a knack, with pencils, it's untouchable.
Good work.

Nick
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This is beautiful.....only one comment....in composition try and work with odd numbers....it is more pleasing to the eye.
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Thank you Allan,
I'll remember your advice.
It's good to know.

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