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Old 01-24-2020, 09:43 AM
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Monument Valley

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Title: Monument Valley
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Medium: Oil
Surface: Canvas
Dimension: 18x24
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

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Suggestions? I think the background clouds need work but I'm conce<br>ed with taking away from the focal point - the light middle ground.
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Old 01-24-2020, 10:15 AM
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Re: Monument Valley

When I worked in the Public Relations Department of Beech Aircraft, I had the fun of being assigned to fly a photographer along some of the old-west trails, and Monument Valley was on the list. Spent several days flying the photographer though the Grand Canyon and MV while he shot miles of movie film. Your painting triggered the memory. Nice painting.
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Old 01-25-2020, 12:33 AM
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Re: Monument Valley

I think the clouds are too dark. I thought they were mountains when I first looked at it. I also think you should lighten the sky and make it a truer blue hue which would be a nice complement to the the wonderful oranges that you have.
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Old 01-25-2020, 11:57 AM
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Re: Monument Valley

Good advice pprender.
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Old 01-26-2020, 02:29 AM
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Re: Monument Valley

I love Arizona/Utah landscapes, Monument Valley is one of the best. Edgar Whitney said "I don't want the truth, I want a beautiful lie", so free yourself from the reference photo. While you were faithful to the color and composition of the photo, I don't think it helps the painting. I think the foreground and middle ground could use some additional separation over the photo. The middle ground rocks can still be orange/yellow, but a cooler (more neutral) shade would help. Or they could be a color of your choosing. Value is king, so perhaps this separation could be created by a value change between the foreground and mid ground. Play with it digitally, and see if you can find anything you like. Best wishes.
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Old 01-26-2020, 01:41 PM
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Re: Monument Valley

Great suggestions acfkt. Thank you all.
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Old 02-06-2020, 11:00 AM
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Re: Monument Valley

Very nice job and good choice of reference! I wonder if darks are too dark all around? I agree with previous comment about the clouds being dark but I also think the darker shadows beneath the foreground grasses make your grasses pop out more than the softer version in the photo. For me, this could cause the viewer to feel blocked before getting to the main act--those beautiful natural fixtures. Great job. This is definitely a painting I could see hanging in my home!
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