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Old 07-22-2012, 03:11 PM
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I'm was not too sure where to post this for C&C, so I cross posted in Portraits and Drawings. It was suggested to post here in The Figure also.
It is a 12x16 pencil (graphite) on Arches smooth paper. Done as a commission for someone who saw my work on my web page, so I have never seen the catcher or the father who wants it. Only had a small photo to work from sent by email. Your thoughts and critique are appreciated.

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Re: The Catcher

I moved your thread to the main forum to gain some comments.
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Jim; your technique is superb and you obviously are able to control the medium quite well. The problem is with the photo source more than with any of your abilities and we all struggle to overcome shortcomings of photo sources. There are a couple of curious things that happen in this drawing. One, the head, particularly the face of the boy feels nicely rounded and in full dimension. When we get to the helmet, it seems to be more of a flat profile and less dimensional. The catcher's mitt is troublesome because it is rendered with the same contrasts and blackness as the head/helmet and thus they end up on the same plane. The mitt hand needs to come forward more. I would have been inclined to render the head and part of the figure that is farther away with less contrast and in a slightly higher key. Likewise, the boy's lower left leg. Since the background is light, low contrast higher key forms will move back to it. Also, give the forms that are farther away softer edges, as this too will help them move away from us in the picture plane.
Another idea, one that is strictly personal and is just my own approach, would be to make his throwing hand slightly larger and the lower two fingers bunched a little tighter to give a more tense expression. If this is a game situation, the emotional content would be a little more charged and a lot of expression can be conveyed in hands. Don't be afraid to take liberties with the source when it can produce a stronger result. Geo
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Some good advice you've gotten. A nice tension filled drawing!
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yes I think you have done a good job with the drawing... and I agree with George's analytical comments and suggestions.

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This is a great drawing. I think the "action" is captured well. I think Geo's comments are all helpful, though the items he mentions don't really bother me.
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Superb attention to detail.
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Superbly executed! You have a mastery of the medium and effectively illustrate the dynamic tension in the youth's movement.
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Thanks - I appreciate your comments.
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