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Old 07-02-2016, 11:46 AM
Yayagal Yayagal is offline
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Re: Comments Welcomed - 12x24 oil

I'd like to see the person on the bench more and diffuse a large part of the dark tree which I think is actually unnecessary. How about painting out the top 2/3s and let us see beyond. Your work is just beautiful in tone and texture.
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Old 04-08-2017, 07:39 PM
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Re: Comments Welcomed - 12x24 oil

There are no rules in art that can't be broken. Thats is an interesting idea to try and I might do something along that way. One thing you might consider is have more activity on each side, more color, people animals etc. to balance out the strong visual point in the center. As it is the tree is much more finished with more detail and more clor so its gets the looks. Another point perhaps a more slender tree. Just mt two cents.
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Re: Comments Welcomed - 12x24 oil

You could cut it right down the middle and you would have two lovely paintings.
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