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Old 09-02-2019, 03:03 PM
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Robert Duvall as Gus

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Title: Robert Duvall as Gus
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Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 8X10
Allow digital alterations?: Yes!

MY COMMENTS:
Graphite sketch of Robert Duvall as Gus in TV series, Lonesome Dove. As a newbie, I'm looking for comments and advice.

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Any comments will be apreciated.
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Old 09-09-2019, 06:59 AM
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Re: Robert Duvall as Gus

Hi Cycroft,
I like your portrait! Robert Duvall definitely has a very interesting face to portray and I think you captured the 'western feel'. His right eye is a bit too high compared to his left. He seems to be squinting a bit more with that eye, but they should still be aligned. Apart from that, I think you could still make more out of this portrait by working a bit further on highlights and shadows. Having more contrasts will make it more catchy. For example, you could add some more shadows in the hat and in the folds of the clothing, so the figure stands out from the background. Alternatively, you could make part of the background darker (darker than the skin tone so you'll have a contrast), and in that case the figure will also stand out more from the background. It all depends on the effect you want to achieve. Hope this helps!
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Old 09-10-2019, 03:48 PM
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Re: Robert Duvall as Gus

Thanks, Edith. Comments noted and appreciated.
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