Nice! Which episode is this from? If I can see the original it will help me provide better comments. Proportions look pretty good… shin may be a bit elongated. The hands and facial profile are well done. He looks really thick through the shoulders… but without source material I can’t be sure. Overall, it’s a convincing study. -Earl

Constance, I think youve done what you aimed to do, especially with the hand. Sometimes poses from online sources look unnatural to begin with and the inevitable distortion of transfering the shape onto paper emphasises this

Wonderful drawing! I really like the faint shadow shapes… there’s so much interesting detail to look at. The proportions are convincing… nothings jumps out at me. Shading is inconsistent but I’m not sure it matters… you’ve added shadow to her facial profile… but much less elsewhere. The figure is convincing. Nice work. What are your goals here? If you’re going for realism I can provide more meaningful input. If you’re wanting to simply create a visually appealing figure that communicates something I’m not quite sure how to describe then… mission accomplished. I don’t have much else to say.

Seeing work like this brightens my day. Thanks for sharing.

-Earl

The fact that we can see clearly how you have worked at the first drawing makes it much more interesting than a more polished piece might be.
The second works really well. There is drama in the way the subject confronts the viewer. The figure has presence.

I love the website too. Really nice work. -E