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Old 02-11-2020, 02:34 PM
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I just finished this one to submit for consideration in a show titled 'Rhythm and Movement'; I like themed shows less than I like thinking of titles....it's 11x14, Mount Visions and Art Spectrum UltraLights on Uart 400 dark; I find the dark paper seems to make the colors pop. Please let me know what you think - I'm still learning. Thanks very much for looking. Neal
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Old 02-11-2020, 02:48 PM
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Neal, your color choices give us a cold Atlantic Breaker. The only suggestion I could give is where the water meets the sand, you could make the sand look wet. That's being really picky and it is fine as is.
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Re: Breaker

Nicely done.
The green in tho rolling wave is a nice touch.
A bit more variation of greens and blues in the rest of the water could be nice.

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Lovely painting. I, too, feel that the dark UArt tends to make the colors pop. Good luck with the show!



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I don't do many landscapes or seascapes but what stand out to me most are the footprints which seem to uniform. It may just be me. Love the wave. I can't do water too well. Love the colors
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