I find this piece incredibly fascinating for some reason! I have studied it closely, trying to find the flaw you think is there, but am striking out. Seriously, I have looked hard. I ask myself, "If she changes this or that, will it make the painting better or just different?" My answer is "just different" to each thing, but not better. The alternate reality, mystery, and interesting story make you look closely at each detail, trying to draw out the meaning of each element. I am with Debzy on this one though. I don't want you to change anything. Sign it and be proud of it. I absolutely love it.