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Old 06-05-2002, 06:26 PM
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I've done this one in pastels, your comments are appreciated..
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Old 06-06-2002, 01:36 PM
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I don't know anything about pastels but the floor and wall look a bit overworked .. could just be the jpg or scanner throwing a glare. Nice work and interesting composition.
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Old 06-06-2002, 02:33 PM
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when i squint the only thing that pops out at me is the white cloth...everything else is the same value, so there's no feeling of depth.

my suggestion would be to add more shadow and highlight to the piece so everything isn't mid range.
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Old 06-10-2002, 11:05 PM
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Arlene is right, you need to look at your values, make this good composition great. I find too that the strokes on your back wall are leading my eye out of the picture. If you could blend that left (On the screen) section of the wall it will be much better.
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Old 06-11-2002, 05:10 AM
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Thank you for your comments, yes, there is a little bit glare because there is glass over it, and the background looks more disturbing in the post then it actually is, the left part could be brighter a bit I agree, and thank you for suggestions regarding values..
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