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December 31, 2019 at 2:50 pm #482055
This is an acrylic and collage piece on a failed painting. Is it too spiritual? What is needed to finish? C&C greatly appreciated. Happy New Year.
KayC
December 31, 2019 at 10:36 pm #925969I like this painting a lot. I wouldn’t mind seeing the main face a bit more sharpened (in focus, I mean). In fact, mixing blurry with sharp would add another dimension to it.
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My InstagramJanuary 1, 2020 at 10:08 am #925962I like the mystery regarding the story in this piece. It is a bit blurry, though. Too spiritual? Why? It is your vision so you decide.
I like it.January 1, 2020 at 12:41 pm #925960I love this one, Kay. By spiritual you must mean the wings up top. But they are not that noticeable. Agree that the main center of interest face should be in sharper focus and others just take on a supportive role in this collage.
Kay
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January 1, 2020 at 1:36 pm #925961A little blurry but I like it….especially the bottom face.
January 1, 2020 at 2:52 pm #925966Thank you for your comments. I tried making the guardian angel’s face more distinct and it still looks too blurry.It may be my camera or lighting. Here is the revised version.
January 1, 2020 at 7:05 pm #925964I love it! Makes me think of all the generations of women in my family who have watched over one another with loving care, advice, and prayers. Thanks for sharing.
January 2, 2020 at 11:01 am #925967Thank you,Carly. Happy New Year.
January 2, 2020 at 11:37 am #925963I think you have made the adjustments needed. I like it.
Makes me think of all the generations of women in my family who have watched over one another with loving care, advice, and prayers.
Yes. Well stated.
January 2, 2020 at 11:48 am #925970January 2, 2020 at 1:16 pm #925965A wonderful piece!
The essential thing, for me, is to offer a visual expression of those things in our experience that words cannot express www.jim-whalen.artistwebsites.comJanuary 3, 2020 at 12:44 pm #925968Thank you for all your help. You got me where I needed to go.
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