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Old 06-11-2016, 03:13 PM
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Leo 2016

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Title: Leo 2016
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Medium: Pencil
Surface: Paper
Dimension: 21 x 29 cm
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Portrait of a friends 8 months old child.

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Old 06-11-2016, 06:53 PM
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Re: Leo 2016

Would it be possible to see a photo of the child? Am wondering about the nose, little guys tend to have a nose that is more bulbous. Maybe a revisit to the eyes as the lower lid tucks up under the upper. All in all, a lovely soft drawing I'm sure she'd appreciate and Welcome to WetCanvas...
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Old 06-12-2016, 10:42 AM
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Re: Leo 2016

Nice job how long have you been drawing? Looks a little off in would like to see the pic you used for reference. Welcome to the WC
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Old 06-21-2016, 01:12 PM
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Re: Leo 2016

His facial features seem well aligned. The value range seems a bit compressed but that may have been deliberate on your part due to the age of the subject.
If you wish you might want to look in on the Portraiture or Drawing and Sketching Forum for further insights.
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Old 06-23-2016, 05:46 PM
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Re: Leo 2016

Babies tend to have very delicate features and I think you did a good job conveying that. I would lighten the upper side of the baby's eyelids a bit more if I were you. The crease above her upper lip seems a bit too deep as well.
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