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  • December 31, 2019 at 2:50 pm #482055
    FULLERARTIST
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        This is an acrylic and collage piece on a failed painting. Is it too spiritual? What is needed to finish? C&C greatly appreciated. Happy New Year.
        Kay

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        December 31, 2019 at 10:36 pm #925969
        MMCoston
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            I like this painting a lot. I wouldn’t mind seeing the main face a bit more sharpened (in focus, I mean). In fact, mixing blurry with sharp would add another dimension to it.

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            January 1, 2020 at 10:08 am #925962
            Jon
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                I like the mystery regarding the story in this piece. It is a bit blurry, though. Too spiritual? Why? It is your vision so you decide.
                I like it.

                January 1, 2020 at 12:41 pm #925960
                KreativeK Moderator
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                    I love this one, Kay. By spiritual you must mean the wings up top. But they are not that noticeable. Agree that the main center of interest face should be in sharper focus and others just take on a supportive role in this collage.

                    Kay

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                    January 1, 2020 at 1:36 pm #925961
                    Perry
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                        A little blurry but I like it….especially the bottom face.

                        January 1, 2020 at 2:52 pm #925966
                        FULLERARTIST
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                            Thank you for your comments. I tried making the guardian angel’s face more distinct and it still looks too blurry.It may be my camera or lighting. Here is the revised version.

                            January 1, 2020 at 7:05 pm #925964
                            CarlyHardy
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                                I love it! Makes me think of all the generations of women in my family who have watched over one another with loving care, advice, and prayers. Thanks for sharing.

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                                January 2, 2020 at 11:01 am #925967
                                FULLERARTIST
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                                    Thank you,Carly. Happy New Year.

                                    January 2, 2020 at 11:37 am #925963
                                    Jon
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                                        I think you have made the adjustments needed. I like it.

                                        Makes me think of all the generations of women in my family who have watched over one another with loving care, advice, and prayers.

                                        Yes. Well stated.

                                        January 2, 2020 at 11:48 am #925970
                                        MMCoston
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                                            The improvement is perfect. Love it!

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                                            January 2, 2020 at 1:16 pm #925965
                                            jimwhalen
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                                                A wonderful piece!

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                                                January 3, 2020 at 12:44 pm #925968
                                                FULLERARTIST
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                                                    Thank you for all your help. You got me where I needed to go.
                                                    Kay

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